Kamis, 09 Oktober 2008

my vacation



hi,guys i want to tell you about my vacation. in last vacation i go to batu,malang,indonesia.
in the evening i arrive to batu. in there is very very cold. in the night i go to payung 1. in there i eat corn and drink milk and i back to hotel. in the morning i go to the mountain to take a bath in the hot spring. and i go to the waterfall.and i back to surabaya.


2 komentar:

Bleach mengatakan...

Dear my friend Ilham,

I have read your story about your vacation. Don't you think, you should use past tense on your story?

Regards,

DIAN

Rahman mengatakan...

Hi there!
your story about your vacation is interesting.Ilham,visit me and add comment in rahman-enc.blogspot.com

HWR,

Rahman